literature

The Feeling

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The feeling is gone, now replaced with hurt
I realize I'm alone

You ask why; I have no response
Even though I threw the first stone

Ending something beautiful tears me up inside
Those tears have turned into tears

I needed someone and you were there
Attachment was one of my fears

Every day the same thing,
Now on to something new

My first but not my last...
I will be fine without you
Why a sunset? I think it is an adequate visual for the "feeling" disappearing.
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Squintz's avatar
Impressive. Great job. Everything seems to tie into everything else on so many levels, hard to do without being wordy. Keep 'em coming.